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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: William Walker on August 11, 2011, 03:34:48 pm

Title: Donkey Cart
Post by: William Walker on August 11, 2011, 03:34:48 pm

I took this some time ago and have been trying a few different options - what do you think of this one?

Thanks
William

Title: Re: Donkey Cart
Post by: RSL on August 11, 2011, 04:42:06 pm

William, It's a terrific shot except for the fence supports directly behind the kids' heads. Wish you'd moved just a couple steps to the right or the left. But it's pretty easily fixable in Lightroom or Photoshop.

Title: Re: Donkey Cart
Post by: William Walker on August 12, 2011, 03:57:06 pm

Thanks Russ, what do you think of this one?

William

Title: Re: Donkey Cart
Post by: Walt Roycraft on August 12, 2011, 05:19:29 pm

I like the first one better. The relationship of the cart to the tree is much better IMHO.

Title: Re: Donkey Cart
Post by: RSL on August 12, 2011, 05:38:17 pm

William, Afraid I have to agree with Walt. I'd just take out the struts in the first one with a quick clone job.

Title: Re: Donkey Cart
Post by: William Walker on August 13, 2011, 01:46:59 am

Thanks guys! I will get to work on that.

William