Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Roberto Frieri on May 26, 2011, 05:50:37 am
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M8 + Tele-Tessar 4/85
Processed with Capture One
For more shots and details: http://web.mac.com/frieri/20110524T200958.html (http://web.mac.com/frieri/20110524T200958.html)
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#1: Doesn't work for me. Will the boat bump against the pillar?
#2: Could be good, but need space on the left side.
#3: For me the most interesting shot. Looks a bit like a riddle, a hidden message I don't understand.
I keep myself asking whats the relation between the couple, the boat and the tree and the mountain.
#4: I am biased here - I used to sail a lot of Laser and love that boat - so I like it.
Overall - I would reduce the vignetting.
If you need a frame in the image - a border to the outside,
it should be the composition, which keeps the image together.
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I have always been a sucker for the "lone tree" shot, so I am immediately drawn to number three. I am not sure about that triangle of land on the left though, nevertheless, it is a picture that I think is good.
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Thank you Christoph and W.Walker for your comments.
Then other shots...
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In the first set, the "lone tree" one speaks to me the most strongly, and in the newer set, the first one.
Eric
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The lone tree shot is just amazing. I like all of the shots, but that one just stands out.
What kind of processing have done? I like how the mountains in the background fade away.
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Thank you Eric and tq-g.
What kind of processing have done? I like how the mountains in the background fade away.
Well, it was a foggy day...
Black and white conversion using Capture One 6 and 2 stops vignette effect.
Sorry for my poor english.