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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: HamSammich on May 19, 2011, 04:11:21 am

Title: Hotel La Bohéme
Post by: HamSammich on May 19, 2011, 04:11:21 am

A little light. A little romance. A little seltzer down your pants.

Title: Re: Hotel La Bohéme
Post by: Rob C on May 19, 2011, 06:27:19 am

Quote from: HamSammich on May 19, 2011, 04:11:21 am

A little light. A little romance. A little seltzer down your pants.

Is the lady still in the bathroom getting ready for the shoot?

Rob C

Title: Re: Hotel La Bohéme
Post by: popnfresh on May 19, 2011, 12:57:58 pm

Quote from: Rob C on May 19, 2011, 06:27:19 am

Is the lady still in the bathroom getting ready for the shoot?

I want to like it, but as Rob said, where's the lady?

Title: Re: Hotel La Bohéme
Post by: HamSammich on May 20, 2011, 01:00:20 am

First off, it's San Francisco, so the lady could be a tramp--or not even a lady. As it happens, the lady's in the, ahem, the other room. I wanted curves in the photo, but not too many curves.

Title: Re: Hotel La Bohéme
Post by: alangubbay on May 26, 2011, 12:24:42 pm

Sorry.  It just does not work for me and the bright stripe down the middle is offputting.