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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: MarkoMijailovic on January 16, 2011, 05:34:44 pm

Title: summer fun
Post by: MarkoMijailovic on January 16, 2011, 05:34:44 pm
(http://farm5.static.flickr.com/4130/4952200473_6ddf27a950.jpg)

larger size:

http://www.flickr.com/photos/markoandmarko/4952200473/lightbox/
Title: Re: summer fun
Post by: stamper on January 17, 2011, 08:30:24 am
The processing is imo too much. However I realise this is a matter of taste. The background isn't the best. Was it unavoidable? Desaturating it would make it better along with a tighter crop. The female is very nice but overall the image could have been better with more thought going into it. Can you re shoot? ::)
Title: Re: summer fun
Post by: MarkoMijailovic on January 17, 2011, 02:47:43 pm
Thanks for the feedback! I guess I should've mentioned the type of look I'm going for... was going for that very vibrant and contrasty burst-of-colour *alive* type look to reflect my friend Erica (the girl in the picture, who's an absolute ball of energy) and the time of year it was taken in- summertime! As for the background, indeed it's not the best of backgrounds, but the photo wouldn't be with such interesting colours if it weren't for that background when I think back. Re-shooting is possible, I just have to wait another four or five months  ;D Oh and lastly (I know it sounds like I'm defending myself too much here- I'm not; just stating facts about the photo), this wasn't a 'planned' shot... This was merely a spur of the moment shot. Thanks again for the feedback, though! I genuinely appreciate all feedback from the folks on here.