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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: huzaifa on December 07, 2010, 04:51:23 am

Title: Seasons of Seattle
Post by: huzaifa on December 07, 2010, 04:51:23 am
Seasons of Seattle
experience the seasons of seattle througn my eyes
http://seasons-of-seattle.blogspot.com/
Title: Re: Seasons of Seattle
Post by: shutterpup on December 07, 2010, 09:41:04 am
I looked at your blog and your photos there. While I enjoyed the poetry, the photos struck me as unremarkable; just "remember this moment" recording and I didn't feel any connection between the poems and the photos. Maybe there wasn't supposed to be any?

I think it would have been better to have chosen a singular, key image that captured the essence of each poem rather than so many pedestrian photos accompanying truly memorable poetry.
Title: Re: Seasons of Seattle
Post by: huzaifa on December 07, 2010, 09:43:59 am
I will appreciate if you also put this comment on the blog
Title: Re: Seasons of Seattle
Post by: shutterpup on December 07, 2010, 11:11:06 am
I will appreciate if you also put this comment on the blog

Is this your personal blog or does it belong to someone else? I cannot for the life of me imagine why you would want my comments, which were derogatory in nature over all, posted on the blog itself.
Title: Re: Seasons of Seattle
Post by: wolfnowl on December 07, 2010, 11:14:26 am
I looked at your blog and your photos there. While I enjoyed the poetry, the photos struck me as unremarkable; just "remember this moment" recording and I didn't feel any connection between the poems and the photos. Maybe there wasn't supposed to be any?

I think it would have been better to have chosen a singular, key image that captured the essence of each poem rather than so many pedestrian photos accompanying truly memorable poetry.

That about sums it up...

Mike.