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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: DuncanAndison on August 10, 2010, 12:02:25 pm

Title: Pools of Zelenci & Summit of Mojstrovka
Post by: DuncanAndison on August 10, 2010, 12:02:25 pm

Ok, looking for some feedback as to whether I have the composition and exposure right on these two shots. I have been looking at them for some time now and I think I am going around in circles, any advice help etc would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks

Duncan

Edit - Just tweaked the images...new ones below

Canon 5D mkii - 17-40L @ 20mm - f/16 - 1/4 sec - grads and tripod.
(http://www.takenfromthetop.com/Images/Specials/SP_0051.jpg)


Canon 5D mkii - 17-40L @17mm - ISO 160 - f/16 - 1/100th sec
(http://www.takenfromthetop.com/Images/Specials/SP_0052.jpg)

Title: Re: Pools of Zelenci & Summit of Mojstrovka
Post by: JeffColburn on August 12, 2010, 05:34:59 pm

I like both shots a lot. I would make the first shot a little darker to saturate the colors a bit more. In the second shot I would burn in the foreground a little to give a little more detail to the white rocks.

The composition in both images is great.

Have Fun,
Jeff

Title: Re: Pools of Zelenci & Summit of Mojstrovka
Post by: DuncanAndison on August 13, 2010, 02:02:07 pm

Thanks for the feedback Jeff, much appreciated. I'll have a bit play in photoshop to see if I can improve the detail of those rocks.

Cheers

Duncan