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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Slobodan Blagojevic on March 11, 2010, 04:15:30 pm

Title: A New York Moment
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on March 11, 2010, 04:15:30 pm
Taken from a double-decker tour bus at night:

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Title: A New York Moment
Post by: fredjeang on March 11, 2010, 04:38:32 pm
Hi slobodan,

I discover with great pleasure this side of your works. (I'm also into that, this is one of the photographic style I like more and more)
I really like the composition and how work together the half-circle and the fence.
How the persons are drawing a circle and to me, my eye end right into the girl with the glasses on her hairs,
and that is where the action, or interaction with the boy is I think.
The black and white convertion is well executed,
and I like the more squared format.
...What else?


Fred.

edit: I did not noticed first the black lined area above the Pizza sign. Maybe the cropper squadron will bomb very soon.  
but this line is actually very necesesary IMO and really participate the overall composition.
Title: A New York Moment
Post by: RSL on March 11, 2010, 07:17:15 pm
Slobodan, Fine shot. The interaction between the two kids in the background wraps it up. The reflection in the mirror helps too. Bravo!
Title: A New York Moment
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on March 11, 2010, 08:12:43 pm
Quote from: RSL
Slobodan, Fine shot. The interaction between the two kids in the background wraps it up. The reflection in the mirror helps too. Bravo!
What Russ said. Very nice!
Title: A New York Moment
Post by: Jeremy Payne on March 11, 2010, 08:47:05 pm
I think the unique angle of view gives it a very different perspective on the street ... and it feels very NYC ... nice shot.
Title: A New York Moment
Post by: wolfnowl on March 12, 2010, 01:48:34 am
Henri would be proud.  Well done!

Mike.
Title: A New York Moment
Post by: John R on March 12, 2010, 09:07:46 pm
It is well done and has NYC look to it. In Toronto, you would likely get cold stares. They seem to ignore you.

JMR
Title: A New York Moment
Post by: seamus finn on March 13, 2010, 06:38:58 am

Good stuff - up with people every time

S
Title: A New York Moment
Post by: Christoph C. Feldhaim on March 31, 2010, 10:19:46 am
A very nice and simple composition which brings out the human factor in the image well.
/me likes.