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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: ArunGaur on January 19, 2010, 10:32:04 pm

Title: At a Shop: Wearing Rajasthani chura
Post by: ArunGaur on January 19, 2010, 10:32:04 pm

One of my nine images in the series on the Fine Women of Rajasthan.

Excuse small size and big sign.

Arun Gaur

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(http://tripolia-indianlandscapeimages.com/images-1/images/Women%20from%20Rajasthan%20-9_jpg.jpg)

Title: At a Shop: Wearing Rajasthani chura
Post by: button on January 19, 2010, 11:19:17 pm

I like the lines and colors.  Did you mean to include the fabric to the far right?  I'm not sure that it adds to the image.

John

Title: At a Shop: Wearing Rajasthani chura
Post by: ArunGaur on January 20, 2010, 08:57:12 pm

Quote from: button

I like the lines and colors.  Did you mean to include the fabric to the far right?  I'm not sure that it adds to the image.

John

John. Thanks for evaluation. I like blank spaces.
Arun Gaur
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Title: At a Shop: Wearing Rajasthani chura
Post by: John R on January 20, 2010, 09:48:04 pm

I find this one simple and elegant. I think the colours and the space on the right are good balance and helps to focus on the arm and its pendants. Your copyright is very distracting, particularly in a small image.

JMR

Title: At a Shop: Wearing Rajasthani chura
Post by: ArunGaur on January 21, 2010, 02:40:02 am

Quote from: John R

I find this one simple and elegant. I think the colours and the space on the right are good balance and helps to focus on the arm and its pendants. Your copyright is very distracting, particularly in a small image.

JMR

Thanks for believing in simplicity.
I would try to rectify the faults.

Arun Gaur

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