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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Payne on January 13, 2010, 08:30:01 am

Title: Images from Dominican Republic
Post by: Jeremy Payne on January 13, 2010, 08:30:01 am

I posted a few images earlier from this trip in December ... here's a whole bunch more ...

http://flickr.com/gp/jeremypayne/40TWq6 (http://flickr.com/gp/jeremypayne/40TWq6)

(http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2787/4270291701_cab2e5f566_o.jpg) (http://www.flickr.com/photos/jeremypayne/4270291701/sizes/o/in/set-72157623075726409/)

Title: Images from Dominican Republic
Post by: button on January 14, 2010, 02:05:21 pm

I like the portrait and the expression.  I wonder if you could make it stronger by desaturating the yellow/green of the leaves, as the tend to pull my eye from the subject.

John