Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: jasonrandolph on May 28, 2009, 01:40:36 am
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Here's another shot from Kaua'i. The waterfall is deliberately small in the shot, as I was going for a capture of the surroundings as well. Does this one work? I think it captures the atmosphere I was going for, but that waterfall is mighty small...
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It looks surreal at first glance, but given the previous commentary, I understand what's going on. So whether it works depends on how and where you want to display it, or whether it would lend itself to changes. If I were making a change, the first thing would be to take out some of the greenish projection near the center, filling in from the background, and then it would have a less surreal look, if that were the desired result.
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Here's another shot from Kaua'i. The waterfall is deliberately small in the shot, as I was going for a capture of the surroundings as well. Does this one work? I think it captures the atmosphere I was going for, but that waterfall is mighty small...
Jason, It's a fine shot. Again, you got the light right. It's the play of the light that makes the picture. Don't mess with it.