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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Timo Löfgren on January 28, 2009, 10:26:00 am

Title: "Rock"
Post by: Timo Löfgren on January 28, 2009, 10:26:00 am

Wista 4x5"+Nikkor 135mm

Title: "Rock"
Post by: pegelli on February 01, 2009, 06:29:32 am

Hi Timo,

Allow me to make some comments on your picture as a new poster here.

I like the tonalities, it gives me a very tranquil feeling, so I hope that's what you wanted to achieve.

In hindsight you might have improved the composition a bit by taking a slightly lower viewpoint such that the light zone of the flat water would have been a bit smaller and brought the horizon somewhat closer to the top of the rock. This might have given a bit more unity in the composition. Just a thought, and pls. realize I'm not an expert critic.

Title: "Rock"
Post by: John R on February 01, 2009, 08:05:58 pm

Wonderful work. Is it a BW with colour tinges or just colour where the elements are almost BW?

JMR