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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Slobodan Blagojevic on November 12, 2019, 09:26:57 pm

Title: A Touching Moment
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on November 12, 2019, 09:26:57 pm

Ocean Moonrise:

Title: Re: A Touching Moment
Post by: David Eckels on November 12, 2019, 10:15:01 pm

Oh yeah! Personally, I'd get rid of the squiggly lines from the passing cruise ship. YMMV.

Title: Re: A Touching Moment
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on November 12, 2019, 10:43:17 pm

Quote from: David Eckels on November 12, 2019, 10:15:01 pm

Oh yeah! Personally, I'd get rid of the squiggly lines from the passing cruise ship. YMMV.

I just think it adds an extra touch ;)

Title: Re: A Touching Moment
Post by: David Eckels on November 13, 2019, 10:21:45 am

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on November 12, 2019, 10:43:17 pm

I just think it adds an extra touch ;)

I do get that. Maybe mirror the squiggly line to the left and somewhat below the moon ;)
However, VERY glad to see you did not violate the rule of thirds! ;D

Title: Re: A Touching Moment
Post by: rabanito on November 13, 2019, 02:48:41 pm

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on November 12, 2019, 10:43:17 pm

I just think it adds an extra touch ;)

It gives some weight to the right side of the horizon, which then looks a tad tilted


And of course the omnipresent squiggles  at the bottom  ;)
Just a liitle joke

Title: Re: A Touching Moment
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on November 13, 2019, 03:03:16 pm

I'm glad you didn't remove the bigger squiggles across the surface of the moon.

You didn't put those in with PhotoShop did you?   :D