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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on October 05, 2019, 07:06:08 am

Title: cupped
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on October 05, 2019, 07:06:08 am

Comments?

Jeremy

Title: Re: cupped
Post by: RSL on October 05, 2019, 07:54:23 am

It's a good grab, Jeremy. That's looking.

Title: Re: cupped
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on October 05, 2019, 08:38:36 am

Yes, a good grab.
You must have paid huge modelling fees to get them positioned just right.

Title: Re: cupped
Post by: francois on October 05, 2019, 11:16:44 am

Nice lines, perfectly "cupped"!

Title: Re: cupped
Post by: John R on October 05, 2019, 12:36:45 pm

I think the composition is little too static. The smaller white berg seems to be the element with the greatest visual pull despite being smaller. It is right in the centre. The white of the larger berg combined with the blue aqua also has greater visual weight then the rest of the image and therefore appears to be unbalanced. I think a crop (is the crop police around) that would offset the small berg and crop the more of the blue of the water and white mass of the larger berg would better balance the image. Really stunning all the same - blue brown and white.

JR