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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Rajan Parrikar on August 05, 2018, 10:51:04 pm

Title: Fieldwork
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on August 05, 2018, 10:51:04 pm

Fieldwork (https://blog.parrikar.com/2018/08/05/fieldwork/) - a photo essay.

Title: Re: Fieldwork
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on August 06, 2018, 12:39:32 am

I am always impressed by your images of the land and people of Goa. These are beautiful.

Title: Re: Fieldwork
Post by: francois on August 06, 2018, 08:42:20 am

Beautiful study of green… I love the first and the last ones, the subject is surrounded by this vibrant green color!
Well seen again, Rajan!

Title: Re: Fieldwork
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on August 06, 2018, 11:43:33 am

Eric and Francois - thanks. Yes, the monsoon season in Goa (and the southern coastal India) is a masterclass in green.

Title: Re: Fieldwork
Post by: MattBurt on August 06, 2018, 01:44:54 pm

I especially like the last one. Such an interesting face.
The first is good too but I think the composition would work better with the subject less centered.

Title: Re: Fieldwork
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on August 06, 2018, 07:10:11 pm

Quote from: MattBurt on August 06, 2018, 01:44:54 pm

I especially like the last one. Such an interesting face.
The first is good too but I think the composition would work better with the subject less centered.

I have a few where she is not centered but I liked her gesture in this one.