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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on July 26, 2018, 02:55:28 pm

Title: door
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on July 26, 2018, 02:55:28 pm

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Jeremy

Title: Re: door
Post by: RSL on July 26, 2018, 03:37:58 pm

Very good wabi sabi, Jeremy. A lot warmer than icebergs.

Title: Re: door
Post by: Farmer on July 26, 2018, 06:38:15 pm

The colours and shapes are lovely.  The grass seems very saturated (colour-wise) but it works with the strength of the colours over all for me.  I'm a bit jealous - I've never taken such a nice "old door" shot despite many attempts!

Title: Re: door
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on July 26, 2018, 08:58:08 pm

It all works very well.

Title: Re: door
Post by: stamper on July 27, 2018, 03:52:14 am

Very likeable!

Title: Re: door
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on July 29, 2018, 03:16:55 pm

Quote from: Farmer on July 26, 2018, 06:38:15 pm

The colours and shapes are lovely.  The grass seems very saturated (colour-wise) but it works with the strength of the colours over all for me.  I'm a bit jealous - I've never taken such a nice "old door" shot despite many attempts!

I like doors and gates as subjects, but only a tiny fraction of the ones I shoot produce anything remotely worthwhile.

You may be right about the grass; I decreased the green/yellow saturation a bit and it looks rather more balanced.

Jeremy

Title: Re: door
Post by: James Clark on July 29, 2018, 05:34:54 pm

A bit vibrant for me - not in an absolute sense so much as in relation to the subject matter.

Title: Re: door
Post by: Farmer on July 29, 2018, 05:45:21 pm

Quote from: Jeremy Roussak on July 29, 2018, 03:16:55 pm

I like doors and gates as subjects, but only a tiny fraction of the ones I shoot produce anything remotely worthwhile.

Well I guess I need to keep shooting!  There is (some) hope :-)