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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: churly on July 24, 2018, 04:59:45 pm

Title: Weeds
Post by: churly on July 24, 2018, 04:59:45 pm
I'm not sure about these so any comments are welcome.
Chuck
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on July 24, 2018, 05:15:34 pm
I like the first two a lot, the third less so.
The high-key effect works well for these subjects.
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: BobDavid on July 24, 2018, 06:27:01 pm
The first one is the strongest of the three. I'd like to see the stem eliminated. ...maybe increase contrast?
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on July 25, 2018, 03:41:07 am
The first is wonderful, and I don't mind the stem at all.

Jeremy
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: churly on July 25, 2018, 10:59:42 am
Thanks for the comments guys.  It is good to get a bit of feedback when you are trying something new/different.  I find it difficult to be objective particularly on shallow DOF shots as my general tendency is to crave sharpness everywhere.  I do these all outdoors and the breeze never stops so focus stacking isn't on the table.

Chuck
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: David Eckels on July 25, 2018, 03:28:11 pm
Although I like the composition/subject of the first two, FWIW, I have to say I do not care for the negative treatment; it seems somewhat "gimmicky" to me. I realize it is an esthetic choice, but I assume that is partly why you posted these in UC. I actually like the shallow DOF, by the way.
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: churly on July 25, 2018, 05:04:47 pm
Thanks Dave. 
The idea of the tonal flip is to abstract things a bit more by presenting a view that doesn't fit what we are used to.  However. I agree it lacks the subtlety to rock the view a bit without being obvious.
Chuck.
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: David Eckels on July 26, 2018, 09:29:57 am
Too bad you can't figure some sort of hybrid effect. There are elements of each version (pos/neg) that are quite attractive, I think.
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: Chris Calohan on August 02, 2018, 02:36:41 pm
Agree with Eric as to the first image.
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: churly on August 03, 2018, 06:44:56 pm
Yes I agree.  I don't produce consistent keepers with these macro shots.  Need more practice and more still air.Chuck
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: Rob C on August 04, 2018, 10:33:54 am
I can state, with confidence, that there is no rapidly moving air in space.

Loads of eclipses, though, mostly in black and white. It's because of all those deep, reflectorless settings old astronauts used to favour. Those Hasselblad and Nikon images of blue planets were pure marketing hype: fake photography. The truth lies closer to the fake moon landing pictures; you know, the ones they made in Lanzarote with early video cameras. But hey, they tried hard, so give them due respect. Remember, there was no Photoshop!


Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: 32BT on August 04, 2018, 10:36:26 am
I can state, with confidence, that there is no rapidly moving air in space.

How so, looks like the prickly one going through the soundbarrier!?
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: Rob C on August 04, 2018, 10:42:19 am
How so, looks like the prickly one going through the soundbarrier!?


Oscar, premature ejaspeculation!


Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: 32BT on August 04, 2018, 10:47:29 am

Oscar, premature ejaspeculation!

Ah, just like the gossipy neighbour then. Don't they have some kind of happy pills for that?
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: Rob C on August 04, 2018, 11:06:19 am
Ah, just like the gossipy neighbour then. Don't they have some kind of happy pills for that?


I think pills were deemed to make the condition worse; lots of C&W songs skirt around the problem with references to lonely tables and last glasses of whisky. The theory seems to be that after a few - last glasses of whisky, that is - the affected persons stops caring and has a dance with a honky-tonk angel instead, going home to find the bedroom door locked and the doghouse prepared with a pillow on which to cry.

Life always offers a silver lining.
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: 32BT on August 04, 2018, 11:11:53 am

I think pills were deemed to make the condition worse; lots of C&W songs skirt around the problem with references to lonely tables and last glasses of whisky. The theory seems to be that after a few - last glasses of whisky, that is - the affected persons stops caring and has a dance with a honky-tonk angel instead, going home to find the bedroom door locked and the doghouse prepared with a pillow on which to cry.

Life always offers a silver lining.

No, no, not the blue pill. The red pill instead. (https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_pill_and_blue_pill)
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: Rob C on August 04, 2018, 11:17:53 am
No, no, not the blue pill. The red pill instead. (https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_pill_and_blue_pill)


Now he tells me!
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: churly on August 05, 2018, 08:15:51 am
Alright, I'll see your weird space object and raise with another.  In this realm even the difference between the blue and red pill becomes fuzzy.
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: Rob C on August 05, 2018, 08:58:18 am
Well, where you embraced the gentle, I seem to have gone to the dark side and embraced (from a safe distance) that crown of thorns!

Here's a different angle of the same time traveller in different manifestation - but a shadow of his former self, one might say. On the bright side, he has a first mate to accompany him this time.

:-)

P.S.

For the technically mined: three pots; two brands of thorny beast.
Title: Re: Weeds
Post by: David Eckels on August 05, 2018, 09:11:35 am
Alright, I'll see your weird space object...
This is a different image to me, perhaps because of its more abstract qualities and the fact that it is less weed-like. Given that, the inversion is less of a niggling, now, IMHO. Sorry for the serious comment ;)