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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: James Clark on July 19, 2018, 11:49:17 am

Title: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: James Clark on July 19, 2018, 11:49:17 am

Found at a college campus in Portland.

Title: Re: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: James Clark on July 19, 2018, 11:50:56 am

Also in the  original ratio.  Thoughts?

Title: Re: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on July 19, 2018, 12:16:34 pm

Both would work and the rectangular one reminds me of Rhein II, but you might want to correct the vertical.

Title: Re: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: James Clark on July 19, 2018, 03:02:24 pm

good eye.  I though I had, but I see it's still not quite straight.

Title: Re: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on July 19, 2018, 04:00:08 pm

Both are good, but I slightly prefer the square version.

Title: Re: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: Rob C on July 20, 2018, 10:32:12 am

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on July 19, 2018, 04:00:08 pm

Both are good, but I slightly prefer the square version.

+1.  :-)

Rob

Title: Re: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: John R on July 20, 2018, 11:09:11 am

Simple and effective.

JR

Title: Re: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: Farmer on July 21, 2018, 05:47:55 pm

Quote from: James Clark on July 19, 2018, 03:02:24 pm

good eye.  I though I had, but I see it's still not quite straight.

Something I admire in Slobo's buildings is that the angles are awesomely precise, so it's little wonder he caught this :-)

Great shots!

Title: Re: Metal Building on a Clear Day
Post by: Rob C on July 22, 2018, 06:11:02 am

Quote from: Farmer on July 21, 2018, 05:47:55 pm

Something I admire in Slobo's buildings is that the angles are awesomely precise, so it's little wonder he caught this :-)

Great shots!

When you spend time in some countries, you learn to be both utterly precise, completely opaque, and always with a back door open!

;-)