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The Art of Photography => Landscape Showcase => Topic started by: Rayyan on July 06, 2018, 04:09:20 pm

Title: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: Rayyan on July 06, 2018, 04:09:20 pm

(http://fursan.zenfolio.com/img/s/v-3/p2958008283-5.jpg)

Title: Re: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: RSL on July 06, 2018, 04:27:06 pm

A stunning shot, Rayyan. I like the processing too.

Title: Re: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: KMRennie on July 06, 2018, 04:53:26 pm

Rayyan nice clouds, nice processing although the shadow areas are a little too dark for me but that is a matter of taste. However the building at the bottom, in a critical position, should be in or out but not 3/4 in as here. I would prefer it all in. It could be that the bottom half of the building has lots of rubbish around it and that is why you have done this but if so an alternative position could have been sought. Ken

Title: Re: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: Rayyan on July 06, 2018, 05:53:36 pm

Russ, Mr. Rennie...thank you for your comments.

Mr. Rennie, your suggestion is a very valid one re:the building. I, too, had realized its importance in the frame. And prefer to leave it there.
Why I chopped it off? Honestly, I don't remember. Lets put it down to my lack of skills.

Thank you both so very much for your encouragement.

Title: Re: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: francois on July 07, 2018, 05:44:07 am

The sky is wonderful and there's something peaceful in this shot that I like very much. Ken raised a valid point regarding the cropped building but this is still a nice image.

Title: Re: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: Rayyan on July 09, 2018, 08:48:57 am

Francois, thank you. Indeed, it is a valid point re: the cropped building.

Quote from: francois on July 07, 2018, 05:44:07 am

The sky is wonderful and there's something peaceful in this shot that I like very much. Ken raised a valid point regarding the cropped building but this is still a nice image.

Title: Re: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: Kevin Gallagher on July 09, 2018, 09:00:58 am

 I can only echo what others have said, great shot Ray. To my eyes, the B&W instead of color is a perfect choice, Bravo!!

Title: Re: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: Rayyan on July 13, 2018, 04:57:00 am

Thanks Kevin.
Best wishes.

Quote from: Kevin Gallagher on July 09, 2018, 09:00:58 am

I can only echo what others have said, great shot Ray. To my eyes, the B&W instead of color is a perfect choice, Bravo!!

Title: Re: Around Lauterbrunnen, Switzerlad
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on July 13, 2018, 03:10:13 pm

Lovely shot, but I agree with Ken about the shadows.

Jeremy