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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on May 29, 2018, 02:02:28 pm

Title: chinstrap and ship
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on May 29, 2018, 02:02:28 pm
Thoughts?

Jeremy
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Post by: RSL on May 29, 2018, 02:24:44 pm
Here comes the boat to pick him up.
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Post by: BobDavid on May 29, 2018, 02:46:57 pm
Ha! The diptych idea is nice, but I think the second one works well as a single image. It tells a story
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Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on May 29, 2018, 03:47:47 pm
Is that thing really grinning that a boat is coming to pick him up?  :D

Btw, #2 for me.
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Post by: Kevin Raber on May 29, 2018, 03:54:27 pm
Nice to see your images from the trip.  I like the second one.
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Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 29, 2018, 10:19:29 pm
The chinstrap and I also vote for number two.
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Post by: francois on May 30, 2018, 07:02:08 am
Has the little guy just landed from the boat?  ;D

Very nice shots, I like both but the last one is my favorite!
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Post by: Chris Calohan on May 31, 2018, 08:21:12 pm
Funny little guys. I too am a #2 fan.
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Post by: Jeremy Roussak on June 01, 2018, 03:15:00 am
Thanks, all. The Zodiac's wake is the distinguishing feature of #2 and although I don't like the large white triangle of snow, it's easily fixable. The only feature of #1 which I preferred was the fact that the bird's head clears the ground line.

Jeremy
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Post by: Jeremy Roussak on June 02, 2018, 02:10:38 pm
Best?

Jeremy
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Post by: RSL on June 02, 2018, 02:12:30 pm
Absolutely. Without the boat the bird's stranded. It's good to know he's going to get out of that godforsaken place.
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Post by: Farmer on June 02, 2018, 06:01:04 pm
Best?

Yep.  Removing the that bit of snow makes a really good difference.
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Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 03, 2018, 12:14:02 am
Excellent. Just they way I would have cheated.   ;)
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Post by: francois on June 03, 2018, 06:21:58 am
Best?

Jeremy

Best of both previous shot. I like it a lot like that.
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Post by: Rajan Parrikar on June 03, 2018, 11:33:43 am
There's a surreal element to these. Well done, Jeremy.