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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Harald L on February 21, 2017, 03:57:56 pm

Title: Scheveningen
Post by: Harald L on February 21, 2017, 03:57:56 pm
Saturday's catch of the day

(http://v3.harlempix.com/wp-content/gallery/portfolio_v3/DSCF5455.jpg)

Title: Re: Scheveningen
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on February 21, 2017, 04:08:09 pm
Very nice.
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Post by: John R on February 21, 2017, 04:19:06 pm
Superb. I would call that abstract.

JR
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Post by: RSL on February 21, 2017, 04:50:14 pm
+1
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Post by: Cem on February 21, 2017, 05:02:33 pm
Excellent catch Harald. How did you find the moment when nobody was around? Or did you do some pp to get rid of people? Not that I mind, just curious! :)
Title: Re: Scheveningen
Post by: Harald L on February 21, 2017, 05:12:58 pm
Excellent catch Harald. How did you find the moment when nobody was around? Or did you do some pp to get rid of people? Not that I mind, just curious! :)

It was a grey and foggy morning - actually no weather for strolling at the beach. This shot were taken a few minutes after the sky cleared up a little bit. Interestingly, I was quite confident that I'm getting a great picture. That happens quite rarely to me.
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Post by: N_N_Nikmat on February 21, 2017, 06:33:18 pm
I like it.  Simple tones and an interesting structure.  This picture has a narrative.  Beautiful.
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Post by: brandtb on February 21, 2017, 06:36:17 pm
Wonderful image
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Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on February 21, 2017, 07:51:09 pm
Wonderful image
It certainly is.
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Post by: Bob_B on February 22, 2017, 07:52:22 am
+1. Great capture.
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Post by: BobDavid on February 22, 2017, 08:19:22 am
+1 

Evocative and minimalist. Nice.
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Post by: PeterAit on February 22, 2017, 11:12:28 am
Excellent!
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Post by: drmike on February 22, 2017, 01:20:10 pm
Great catch.
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Post by: MattBurt on February 22, 2017, 01:53:45 pm
I like it too although I wouldn't call it abstract. It's very much a photo of a scene with a light post(s), benches, and the sea. Perhaps minimalist would be a more accurate term.
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Post by: Patricia Sheley on February 22, 2017, 02:45:29 pm
~minimalist, gull...
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Post by: Telecaster on February 22, 2017, 05:01:21 pm
I'd go with minimalist too. Great pic in any case.

-Dave-
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Post by: Patricia Sheley on February 22, 2017, 11:39:06 pm
Harald~ The original I think would have worked too with just a bit more headroom. I liked him there... nice surprise. Actually played with a bit of content aware scaling to give him flight room and move the image toward square in doing so. Simply like the quietly serene atmosphere. (Don't lose him, you may find you miss him there.  ;) ) Like.
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Post by: Patricia Sheley on February 22, 2017, 11:42:55 pm
~also, I can almost feel bodies there, as in 6-8 min. exposure and their decision to remain apart, with no pause in doing so. A lot more here than meets the first eye.
Title: Re: Scheveningen
Post by: Richowens on February 22, 2017, 11:54:37 pm

    WOW..........
Title: Re: Scheveningen
Post by: Harald L on February 23, 2017, 04:01:35 am
Harald~ The original I think would have worked too with just a bit more headroom. I liked him there... nice surprise. Actually played with a bit of content aware scaling to give him flight room and move the image toward square in doing so. Simply like the quietly serene atmosphere. (Don't lose him, you may find you miss him there.  ;) ) Like.

Don't be worry, I'm not going to miss him. But with the missing headroom you've got a real pain point because I've took a second frame in which I sacrified some foreground in order to get more headroom. Unfortunately, it's blurred!

That's the problem when you strolling around with just one fixed lens (here my 23 f1.4 honey). It was kind of a situation which everyone of us knows. The frame was determined by the horizonatal elements and I couldn't go back further because the promenade of Scheveningen is limited by a wall... A kingdom for my 18 mm...

After all it remains a snapshot with all of it quirks. I'm pretty sure that next time I'm visiting my daughter in The Hague I won't have this serene atmosphere. Sometime it's hard to just be an amateur :(

PS: Thank you for getting your teeth into my picture.
Title: Re: Scheveningen
Post by: Chairman Bill on February 23, 2017, 05:13:54 am
That's a great image