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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: the_marshall_101 on February 03, 2017, 03:08:44 pm

Title: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: the_marshall_101 on February 03, 2017, 03:08:44 pm
Just a couple of shots from earlier in the week - Bournemouth pier, south coast of the UK.  I thought I knew which one I preferred but now I'm not so sure ;)  Any comments gratefully received.
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: pegelli on February 03, 2017, 03:39:25 pm
Nice shots. I like the 2nd (#3) best. The extra wave shape in the foreground gives it something extra.
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on February 03, 2017, 04:11:18 pm
Nice shots. I like the 2nd (#3) best. The extra wave shape in the foreground gives it something extra.
They are both excellent, but I agree with Pieter: The second is best.
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: JohnBeasley on February 03, 2017, 05:00:06 pm
I think I prefer the 1st... the bright light give it a slight ominous feeling for me, a little like something from a 80s horror movie and the bridge pulls you in :)
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: graeme on February 03, 2017, 05:20:50 pm
Nice shots. I like the 2nd (#3) best. The extra wave shape in the foreground gives it something extra.

+1
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on February 03, 2017, 06:23:31 pm
Fine images. The burning of the borders could have been more subtle, but this is a quibble.
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: brandtb on February 03, 2017, 08:04:00 pm
Very nice that first image, subject, color, and tonality. The subject is strongly directional and leading to point...that really bright wash of water (moving laterally) in foreground of the second image just clutters the frame and takes attention away from pier and its terminus - making it not nearly as strong a composition
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on February 04, 2017, 04:35:13 am
I prefer the first. I would try to tone down the bright bar of light a little, though: it draws the eye and isn't in keeping with the muted tones of the rest of the shot. I'm not suggesting getting rid of it, of course, just dropping the brightness a little.

Jeremy
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: stamper on February 04, 2017, 05:56:31 am
Both are fine images and the processing is just right.
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: the_marshall_101 on February 04, 2017, 08:36:13 am
Thanks all for your comments and compliments.  It's an interesting split of opinions.  I initially processed the first one, then went back and flashed the same settings over some other shots from the same shoot that hadn't caught my eye so much, and the second one grew on me quite a lot.

I think I would choose either for display/print depending on what it was going together with.

I wouldn't say the processing is 100 % yet - would do a little more work on them - including maybe darkening the bright neon sign (it's already been desaturated in Lightroom as it had red stuff in it!), although it doesn't bother me too much.  I just hate going out to Photoshop just for that!
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: the_marshall_101 on February 04, 2017, 08:39:01 am
Fine images. The burning of the borders could have been more subtle, but this is a quibble.

Thanks Rajan.  Yes, I'd probably agree with you.  I find it looks right viewed full size, but in thumbnail form looks too drastic.  Some more fiddling to be done :)
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: sdwilsonsct on February 04, 2017, 08:24:13 pm
Thanks Rajan.  Yes, I'd probably agree with you.  I find it looks right viewed full size, but in thumbnail form looks too drastic.  Some more fiddling to be done :)

Hard to choose: they are both very fine.
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: Paulo Bizarro on February 06, 2017, 04:12:01 am
#1 for me, much more "elegant" and to the point. I like the bright light, it draws the attention, of course, but since it is at the end of the leading lines, works great.
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: the_marshall_101 on February 06, 2017, 04:14:59 pm
#1 for me, much more "elegant" and to the point. I like the bright light, it draws the attention, of course, but since it is at the end of the leading lines, works great.

Thanks for your thoughts; great to hear all the different viewpoints!
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: robertDthomas on February 09, 2017, 08:41:19 pm
#2 best for me.  More alive
Title: Re: Bournemouth pier in the mist
Post by: francois on February 10, 2017, 04:11:12 am
Very batman-esque! I like #2 best but both are fantastic.