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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: graeme on January 08, 2017, 05:27:42 pm

Title: More For Sale
Post by: graeme on January 08, 2017, 05:27:42 pm

Another image from my insomnia trek. More pleased with the BW I got out of this one but again I think the colour may be more interesting. Have attached both versions.

Title: Re: More For Sale
Post by: Tony Jay on January 08, 2017, 06:30:40 pm

Apart from the red lettering on the signs even the colour image is practically monotone.
I wonder if desaturating and then re-colouring the red would not work.
Just a thought...

Tony Jay

Title: Re: More For Sale
Post by: BobDavid on January 09, 2017, 12:03:30 am

I like the color version. You may consider eliminating the plant behind the male figure on the left. I like the red letters--if anything, I'd brighten them up.

Title: Re: More For Sale
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 09, 2017, 12:26:56 am

I agree that a brighter red for the signs and monochrome for the rest would work just fine.

(It's good you are not posting these in the For Sale section.   ;D )