Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RSL on January 04, 2017, 07:55:42 pm
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Reminds me a little of the last one you posted with the wooden door and the textured beige wall. Are you exploring a new direction?
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Beautiful geometric composition.
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Beautiful geometric composition.
I certainly agree with Eric about the geometric aspects to this image.
The door frame, the door itself and its construction, the wall with its breeze-block construction, the repeating pattern in the floor boards, and finally the hay bales - all geometric.
And then there is the amorphous shadow making up the left edge of the image - intrigues the hell out of me!
In the best way possible, this image reminds of a conjurers trick, where one's gaze is directed toward the obvious until the conjurer is ready to dazzle everyone with his illusion.
I don't reckon that I have "got" this image yet, but I promise you I will be back...
Tony Jay
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I wonder if the sliver of light was needed.
Beautiful structures otherwise.
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I chuckled when I realized the image itself was
a rectangle, as well as the contents.
Regards,
Dale
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Thanks all. I suspect you all do the same thing I do: when I'm out, my head is constantly throwing frames around things. If I see a frame I like, I raise the camera and shoot. This particular frame was in a Leesburg, FL feed store.
Tony, I don't remember what was casting that shadow. Next time I'm over there I'll check.
Bob, no, my favorite thing still is street, but I'm in a situation nowadays where I rarely can do it. I look forward to our trips to St. Augustine because St. George street is one of the greatest places in the world for street shooting. In the meantime I just look. "Photographing is nothing. Looking is everything."
And Armand, enough of the door to show the source of the light was a necessary part of the frame.