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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Randy Carone on December 21, 2016, 08:51:33 am

Title: Coexist
Post by: Randy Carone on December 21, 2016, 08:51:33 am

Plenty for everyone.

Title: Re: Coexist
Post by: BobDavid on December 21, 2016, 09:32:37 am

That's a neat picture. My only suggestion is to crop out the tree on the left side of the frame.

Title: Re: Coexist
Post by: Randy Carone on December 21, 2016, 10:39:17 am

I puzzled over that for a while. Still can't decide. Here's another version, but I liked the faux-pano more.

Title: Re: Coexist
Post by: Randy Carone on December 21, 2016, 10:43:47 am

I wish there was more going on in the sky, but the starkness may work for this image. I was never good at importing sky.

Title: Re: Coexist
Post by: N80 on December 21, 2016, 03:50:02 pm

Quote from: Randy Carone on December 21, 2016, 10:43:47 am

I wish there was more going on in the sky, but the starkness may work for this image. I was never good at importing sky.

I like this crop/edit best. Nice image. I like it. Reminds me of home...deer, cows, hay.

Title: Re: Coexist
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on December 21, 2016, 04:38:43 pm

Good image.

But I would crop it differently, so the deer gets a bit more prominence. Like this:

Title: Re: Coexist
Post by: Otto Phocus on December 27, 2016, 06:21:03 am

Quote from: BobDavid on December 21, 2016, 09:32:37 am

That's a neat picture. My only suggestion is to crop out the tree on the left side of the frame.

I agree.  Half a tree is can be distracting.