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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on November 19, 2016, 02:11:01 pm

Title: zigzag
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on November 19, 2016, 02:11:01 pm

I'm not sure about this, but it was a very pleasant walk.

Comments?

Jeremy

Title: Re: zigzag
Post by: Arlen on November 19, 2016, 02:27:03 pm

Unusual but very fine, Jeremy. It makes you look all around and back again.

Title: Re: zigzag
Post by: RSL on November 19, 2016, 03:24:31 pm

Help! I'm sliding off the earth.

Title: Re: zigzag
Post by: luxborealis on November 19, 2016, 03:26:08 pm

Great stone fences, great sky. It looks surrealistic.

Title: Re: zigzag
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on November 19, 2016, 03:40:07 pm

Quote from: luxborealis on November 19, 2016, 03:26:08 pm

Great stone fences, great sky. It looks surrealistic.

Wild!
Great catch.

Title: Re: zigzag
Post by: John R on November 19, 2016, 04:45:10 pm

A fine image. Only one suggestion, consider cloning out right fence post, or cropping it out. I think the visual flow, already quite good, will improve as the viewer will immediately get drawn in by the stone fence and not stop at the first post.

JR

Title: Re: zigzag
Post by: pearlstreet on November 19, 2016, 07:11:56 pm

Nice black and white. The fence really blocks the photo imo. Would have been better taken from another angle or if someone was looking over the fence. I know a lot of landscape photographers don't like to include people, but in this case, I think it would make the comp stronger as it would draw you further into the photo.