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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RSL on September 22, 2016, 10:29:00 am

Title: Dawn Blooms
Post by: RSL on September 22, 2016, 10:29:00 am

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Title: Re: Dawn Blooms
Post by: BobDavid on September 22, 2016, 10:33:29 am

I like the way the blooms fluoresce.

Title: Re: Dawn Blooms
Post by: GrahamBy on September 22, 2016, 10:42:26 am

Nicely minimalist  :)

Title: Re: Dawn Blooms
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 22, 2016, 01:35:30 pm

Nice.

Title: Re: Dawn Blooms
Post by: RSL on September 22, 2016, 03:29:17 pm

Thanks all. Graham, it's probably even more minimalist than you think. When I framed it and shot it I knew the little blooms needed to be in the picture but I was concentrating on the light around the bases of the trees. It wasn't until I got the thing up on a computer monitor that I realized how important those little blooms were. That was when I decided to post it.

Title: Re: Dawn Blooms
Post by: N80 on September 22, 2016, 04:24:42 pm

The light in the trees is appealing but I would have liked to see the blooms figure more prominently. Maybe a lower and closer perspective? Not sure if that would have allowed you to include the lighting in the trees though. I certainly get the feel of a beautiful morning from this shot.