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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: RSL on September 20, 2016, 09:22:56 am

Title: Dawn on the Palatlakaha
Post by: RSL on September 20, 2016, 09:22:56 am
With the summer heat beating on everything, St. Augustine for some street photography hasn't been an attractive thought. But many mornings I walk the river when the sun's just up.
Title: Re: Dawn on the Palatlakaha
Post by: wmchauncey on September 20, 2016, 10:47:05 am
Is it habitable?
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Post by: RSL on September 20, 2016, 11:25:27 am
Actually, no. It's a boathouse, currently without a boat.
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Post by: Arlen on September 20, 2016, 01:14:40 pm
I like this one quite a lot, Russ. It looks like it might also be a good candidate for B&W.
Title: Re: Dawn on the Palatlakaha
Post by: RSL on September 20, 2016, 01:49:38 pm
Interesting thought, Arlen. I loved the colors, but it's not bad in B&W.
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Post by: luxborealis on September 20, 2016, 01:58:10 pm
Beautifully, mysteriously tropical.
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Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 20, 2016, 03:56:19 pm
It's beautiful both ways.
I guess you need to start thinking of the river as your local "street."
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Post by: N80 on September 20, 2016, 05:03:23 pm
I like the B&W better....but I almost always do. The boathouse is hidden by the foliage which dominates the frame. I think this makes the viewer want to see more, wondering what is there.... which is a nice effect. But I wonder if just a little more of the boathouse showing would enhance that effect and maybe give it a touch more context?
Title: Re: Dawn on the Palatlakaha
Post by: stamper on September 21, 2016, 03:55:18 am
In this instance I think the colour wins but the B&W isn't far behind. Both would look fine with a frame around them and hung on a wall.
Title: Re: Dawn on the Palatlakaha
Post by: RSL on September 21, 2016, 09:15:03 am
Here's the boathouse from a slightly different angle -- again, shortly after sunrise. An interesting thing about the river is that I can walk it as many times as I want to and the light is always slightly different. I must have at least fifty shots of my favorite tree, and they're all different. Same thing is true of this boathouse. I've shot it over and over again and the pictures are all different.
Title: Re: Dawn on the Palatlakaha
Post by: N80 on September 21, 2016, 09:25:06 am
Certainly less mystery in the second shot but it sure draws me in and makes me want to be there.
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Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 21, 2016, 10:13:13 am
Certainly less mystery in the second shot but it sure draws me in and makes me want to be there.
I agree.
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Post by: seamus finn on September 21, 2016, 02:01:30 pm
Certainly less mystery in the second shot but it sure draws me in and makes me want to be there.

Me too - and yes, as Eric suggests, the river may be the new street for Russ!