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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on May 30, 2016, 02:13:47 pm

Title: ebb 2
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on May 30, 2016, 02:13:47 pm

Thoughts?

Jeremy

Title: Re: ebb 2
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 30, 2016, 02:20:38 pm

Nicely timed, but I'd like to see the light areas a bit lighter. The approaching line of surf feels gray instead of white, for instance.

But be careful not to make the scene look too harsh.

Just my two farthings.

-Eric

Title: Re: ebb 2
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on May 30, 2016, 02:35:58 pm

Quote from: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 30, 2016, 02:20:38 pm

Nicely timed, but I'd like to see the light areas a bit lighter. The approaching line of surf feels gray instead of white, for instance.

But be careful not to make the scene look too harsh.

Just my two farthings.

-Eric

You're not wrong, Eric. As so often when someone points out an error, I'm forced to wonder how I could have made it. I was concentrating on bringing out a little detail in the advancing wave; I overdid it.

Jeremy

Title: Re: ebb 2
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on May 30, 2016, 06:05:19 pm

Yes! That's more like it.