Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: maggieddd on April 22, 2006, 06:58:55 pm
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This picture was taken with slide film. I processed it twice in Photoshop. Once for the sky and once for the pyramid. Then I merged them together.
What do you think, and what could I do to improve it.
Thank you
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I thought the first version was a bit flat, so I changed it. What do you think?
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The first one is flat, I agree. There are parts of the second one that I like better but I don't really like what it is doing to parts of the pyramid. Should be a nice image with the right conversion. Maybe blend the two conversions to take the edge off? What does the color version look like?
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I thought the first version was a bit flat, so I changed it. What do you think?
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The first version was a bit flat, but the contrast has obscured interesting detail in the second one--I would work on finding some middle ground with smoother tonalities but more contrast.