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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on December 26, 2015, 07:50:11 am

Title: stairs and window
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on December 26, 2015, 07:50:11 am

Thoughts?

Jeremy

Title: Re: stairs and window
Post by: brandtb on December 26, 2015, 09:07:06 am

J - really great subject/nice frame (where btw?). I would look at it with the "white" areas of the walls surrounding opening..."pulled down a bit"...and also with a vignette. /B

Title: Re: stairs and window
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on December 29, 2015, 04:29:41 am

Quote from: brandtb on December 26, 2015, 09:07:06 am

J - really great subject/nice frame (where btw?). I would look at it with the "white" areas of the walls surrounding opening..."pulled down a bit"...and also with a vignette. /B

Thanks, B. A vignette does improve it.

It's at Château de Blois, in the Loire valley.

Jeremy

Title: Re: stairs and window
Post by: stamper on December 29, 2015, 08:28:32 am

As it is a fine image with good processing.The white areas act as a frame for the darker middle part where the main interest is.

Title: Re: stairs and window
Post by: francois on January 04, 2016, 07:24:18 am

Great shot. I like the contrast between the straight lines of the outside and the twisted staircase.
Processing is very well done.

Title: Re: stairs and window
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on January 04, 2016, 09:18:49 am

Quote from: stamper on December 29, 2015, 08:28:32 am

As it is a fine image with good processing.The white areas act as a frame for the darker middle part where the main interest is.

I agree. Getting the indoor and outdoor both parts to work so well is a challenge which you have met very well.

Eric