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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: verma_deepak on November 14, 2015, 02:17:17 pm

Title: mirror...
Post by: verma_deepak on November 14, 2015, 02:17:17 pm
Please provide ur feedback
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: DaveRichardson on November 15, 2015, 08:10:29 am

I might have tried to straighten the horizon but that is personal taste. Also there is quite a bit of dust that could do with spotting out  ;)

Overall though as a picture I like it.


Dave
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Post by: Jeremy Roussak on November 15, 2015, 02:14:48 pm
I might have tried to straighten the horizon but that is personal taste. Also there is quite a bit of dust that could do with spotting out  ;)

Overall though as a picture I like it.

Dave

I agree with both comments. I think it's worth a bit of work.

Jeremy
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: verma_deepak on November 16, 2015, 04:31:19 am
Thanks..I really appreciate your feedback..
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: Paulo Bizarro on November 16, 2015, 05:24:10 am
I like the light, and the location seems very good. I find the people distracting, I wonder if there is a stronger image, with just the clouds, sea, and sand?

As others have said, it is worth it to level the horizon, spot clean the image, and also to correct for the strong barrel distortion on the horizon.
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on November 16, 2015, 09:52:50 am
I like the light, and the location seems very good. I find the people distracting, I wonder if there is a stronger image, with just the clouds, sea, and sand?

As others have said, it is worth it to level the horizon, spot clean the image, and also to correct for the strong barrel distortion on the horizon.
I mostly agree with Paulo and the others, and I usually don't like people in photos unless they add something to the scene. In this image, the "ghostliness" of the people seems to add to the mood. Just my two farthings.
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Post by: Art Kelly on November 20, 2015, 12:46:07 pm
It's a great shot. I like the "apparitions" on the left side.

...a bit of dust that could do with spotting out.

After getting bitten (ykw) by dust on a wide-angle lens pointed toward a sunset, I think wide-angle lenses should come with a duster attached with a lanyard.
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: sarrasani on November 20, 2015, 09:51:08 pm
strong but well working ( and well underscoring the spots, I know the problem...)contrast, very good colours.
I like also the robust composition and the "ghosts"....

All the best,
sandro
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: verma_deepak on November 24, 2015, 02:05:23 am
Thanks Guys, I will remove dust spots and straiten the horizon..thanks for constructive feedback and the good words..
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: verma_deepak on November 25, 2015, 12:14:13 pm
Hi, Please provide feedback to my another pic
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: Bruno Gil on November 26, 2015, 02:20:49 pm
I like the light, and the location seems very good. I find the people distracting, I wonder if there is a stronger image, with just the clouds, sea, and sand?

As others have said, it is worth it to level the horizon, spot clean the image, and also to correct for the strong barrel distortion on the horizon.

x2
Paulo said everything
Cheers
Title: Re: mirror...
Post by: marcgoldring on November 27, 2015, 06:08:48 am
Pesky people, always getting in the way of good shots!!

;)

Marco
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Post by: Jens Peermann on December 10, 2015, 09:04:16 pm
Wonderful scene and composition.

I agree with the dust suggestions; the dust was the first detail I noticed. this image is really worth investing a few minutes to clean it up.

I also  would have applied an ND filter to get rid of the people and ad some softness to the clouds.