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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: Mjollnir on August 28, 2015, 03:05:07 pm

Title: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Mjollnir on August 28, 2015, 03:05:07 pm
Taken on a really, REALLY long way home from my family's ranch NE of Merced on the way back to Los Angeles.  It was stormy all around us to the SW, but not where we were at about the 43/46 interchange, so we went due west and into the Temblor Range via Bitterwater Valley Road and then onto the Carrizo Plain, where the clouds made the extension of the journey worthwhile.

(https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7490/15760236897_7d7f894e85_b.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/q1Fkmn)Temblor Range, Light Stripe, 2nd treatment (https://flic.kr/p/q1Fkmn) by tanngrisnir3 (https://www.flickr.com/photos/87368247@N00/), on Flickr
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on August 28, 2015, 03:41:25 pm
If you were Alain Briot, you'd twist the upper gray cloud to replicate the shape of the mountain ridge. ;)
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: ddolde on August 28, 2015, 04:01:58 pm
HaHa
If you were Alain Briot, you'd twist the upper gray cloud to replicate the shape of the mountain ridge. ;)


Great shot as is !
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: mbaginy on August 28, 2015, 04:59:34 pm
Beautiful!!!!
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Mjollnir on August 28, 2015, 06:00:32 pm
If you were Alain Briot, you'd twist the upper gray cloud to replicate the shape of the mountain ridge. ;)

Oh, man.  Now I have to go and Google "Alain Briot"

Sometimes I feel like I'm the photo-knowledge equivalent of a guy who uses the wrong fork during the wrong course.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on August 28, 2015, 06:19:36 pm
Oh, man.  Now I have to go and Google "Alain Briot"...

Nah... just read his articles on photo manipulation here, on LuLa.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Colorado David on August 28, 2015, 07:37:26 pm
Well done. I think that is a remarkable image.  I wish it were mine.  If I'd shot that image, I would process a variant that was a panorama.  That's is certainly not a criticism of your image, just the way I see multiple opportunities in one well shot image.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Rajan Parrikar on August 28, 2015, 07:42:38 pm
Great image. The uppermost band of cloud is superfluous in my view, but this is a nit.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: NancyP on August 28, 2015, 08:07:24 pm
Great light and excellent capture!
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: langier on August 29, 2015, 12:39:18 am
Nice! The Temblor Range is a hidden California gem, especially in spring when it's green.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Mike Brown on August 29, 2015, 05:08:07 am
Wonderful, an outstanding image.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: DwayneOakes on August 29, 2015, 05:58:02 am
The grey cloud ban it not working for me. I would crop it out to just below it or go pano.
But that is just my take on this stunning image.

Dwayne Oakes
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Mjollnir on August 29, 2015, 10:04:13 am
Well done. I think that is a remarkable image.  I wish it were mine.  If I'd shot that image, I would process a variant that was a panorama.  That's is certainly not a criticism of your image, just the way I see multiple opportunities in one well shot image.

While it's not a pano, per se, here's a wider take on it, processed differently than the first on, slightly lighter touch.  I also just noticed a clone spot in the upper cloud, frame right.

(https://farm8.staticflickr.com/7469/15736304060_2b7522bc37_b.jpg) (https://flic.kr/p/pYyEXf)Temblor Range, Light Stripe (https://flic.kr/p/pYyEXf) by tanngrisnir3 (https://www.flickr.com/photos/87368247@N00/), on Flickr
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on August 29, 2015, 11:34:12 am
While it's not a pano, per se, here's a wider take on it, processed differently than the first on, slightly lighter touch.  I also just noticed a clone spot in the upper cloud, frame right.

Now I have to add another site to my list of Places To Visit!

Both are excellent. I prefer the first, but I think both could do with cropping at the top.

Jeremy
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Mjollnir on August 29, 2015, 01:45:23 pm
Now I have to add another site to my list of Places To Visit!

Both are excellent. I prefer the first, but I think both could do with cropping at the top.

Jeremy

Thanks.  I think the easiest way to get that clone stamp out of the 2nd on is, as you say, simply to crop.

If you ever need any pointers about what's around there (and there's a lot around there, not all of it obvious as to how to get there) let me know.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Colorado David on August 29, 2015, 06:42:18 pm
I am very reluctant to mess with someone else's image, especially without their permission.  Please forgive me. This is what I was thinking of.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Bob_B on August 29, 2015, 07:50:42 pm
With due respect to Jeremy, I have to say that Colorado David's edit/plano is very appealing.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on August 30, 2015, 04:19:33 am
With due respect to Jeremy, I have to say that Colorado David's edit/plano is very appealing.

I agree: it's pretty much exactly what I had in mind.

If you ever need any pointers about what's around there (and there's a lot around there, not all of it obvious as to how to get there) let me know.

Thanks for the offer! I shall.

Jeremy
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: thierrylegros396 on August 30, 2015, 11:06:39 am
Great image. The uppermost band of cloud is superfluous in my view, but this is a nit.


+1

Thierry
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: AnthonyM on August 30, 2015, 01:38:24 pm
Very dramatic, but I agree with those who would lose the top band of cloud.  It clashes with the rest of this lovely image.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: sdwilsonsct on August 30, 2015, 01:43:38 pm
Good timing. I'd keep the top clouds: they add a satisfying symmetry, and remind me that life is messy.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Mjollnir on August 30, 2015, 10:54:58 pm
I am very reluctant to mess with someone else's image, especially without their permission.  Please forgive me. This is what I was thinking of.

No need to apologize; great minds think alike!

I have several like that that I've made since posting it, and yours is an admirable take on it.

Thanks!
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Mjollnir on August 30, 2015, 10:56:57 pm
With due respect to Jeremy, I have to say that Colorado David's edit/plano is very appealing.

Jeremy?
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Paulo Bizarro on September 07, 2015, 06:32:24 am
Great image, with lots of potential for possible interpretations, as seen.
Title: Re: Temblor Range, Light Stripe, Treatment 2
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on September 07, 2015, 09:45:40 am
How did I miss this one? I guess it happened when I was away for a week.

But WOWIE! What a stunning image. The place may be photogenic, but its surely the light and dark clouds that make the image.

If it were my shot, I'd probably crop out the lighter clouds at the top but keep pretty much all of the dark clouds, in either the original or the pano version.

Truly spectacular in all versions!