Luminous Landscape Forum

The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: stamper on July 27, 2015, 08:29:30 am

Title: Abstraction.
Post by: stamper on July 27, 2015, 08:29:30 am

Makes me seasick to look at this.

Title: Re: Abstraction.
Post by: Bob_B on July 27, 2015, 09:48:24 am

I like it, and get the feeling of movement in both horizontal (left to right) and vertical (bottom to top) directions. Maybe that can induce vertigo in some?

Title: Re: Abstraction.
Post by: Bruce Cox on July 27, 2015, 11:17:29 am

The relationship between the high contrast sharp figures and the soft noisy background is tenuous.  

You might be better off substituting a different water or even sky shot for the background.