Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on June 12, 2015, 03:03:41 pm
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Jeremy
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For some reason my eyes keep jumping to the shadow in the bottom right corner.
Later,
Johnny
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I like it. Nice job on the B&W.
Surely you have more from the same locale?
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I like it. Nice job on the B&W.
Surely you have more from the same locale?
Thanks. To my shame, I don't: I've been walking past here almost daily for a decade and this is the first time I've taken photographs! I'm definitely going to spend a good deal more time there, not just walking briskly to and from work.
Johnny, you're right: now you mention it, so are mine. It's easy enough to remove.
Jeremy
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I like it, too.
But I would be tempted either to (1) crop up from the bottom to eliminate the corner shadow, or (2) clone out the corner shadow and the dark triangle a little above it with content-aware fill.
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I like it, too.
But I would be tempted either to (1) crop up from the bottom to eliminate the corner shadow, or (2) clone out the corner shadow and the dark triangle a little above it with content-aware fill.
Removing the corner shadow was easy (as it happened, clone/stamp worked better than CAF). Which dark triangle?
Jeremy
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Removing the corner shadow was easy (as it happened, clone/stamp worked better than CAF). Which dark triangle?
Jeremy
The thing that sticks in from the right just a little above the now-removed corner shadow.
Here it is(n't), removed via CAF. ;)
Without it, I can concentrate on the columns.
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What a great subject. I like where you are going with the black and white; the tonality is so rich. I hope to seem more photos of this place.
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... I like where you are going with the black and white; the tonality is so rich ...
Pretty much my thoughts
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Some nice shapes on view and the processing suits the subject.
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The thing that sticks in from the right just a little above the now-removed corner shadow.
Here it is(n't), removed via CAF. ;)
Without it, I can concentrate on the columns.
Ah, I see. I'd have described it as a flowerbed. I'll have to think about that: I see what you're getting at but I wonder if there's not now too much of an open space.
What a great subject. I like where you are going with the black and white; the tonality is so rich. I hope to seem more photos of this place.
I'm certainly going to take some, now I realise what I've been missing. To the left of the pillars, the road is cobbled, so the textures there should be worthwhile.
Jeremy