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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: mseawell on May 30, 2015, 03:12:58 pm

Title: Legends
Post by: mseawell on May 30, 2015, 03:12:58 pm

The Tetons evokes memories of what was. So timeless, one can easily imagine the days of old where the settlers saw these looming mountains in their horse drawn buggies and paused to study this great earth gestures or herds of bison teeming all over this land grazing in the shadows of the mountains. Legends.

Title: Re: Legends
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on May 31, 2015, 03:55:42 am

I like the composition and the feeling of isolation. I think, though, that you could lighten the building a bit and that you've overcooked the sky.

Jeremy

Title: Re: Legends
Post by: stamper on May 31, 2015, 05:10:04 am

Jeremy has got it right. The processing is a bit harsh imo. Having said that it is your vision and overall I like it.

Title: Re: Legends
Post by: Chairman Bill on May 31, 2015, 08:39:02 am

The main focus here (IMHO) should be the stream leading the eye into towards the building. The mountains & sky are backdrop (albeit very nice backdrop), and shouldn't compete for attention as they currently do. Some subtle reprocessing should sort that & leave a fine image. Then I'd print it, 'cos it's worth printing.

Title: Re: Legends
Post by: thierrylegros396 on May 31, 2015, 10:14:46 am

Well done.

But I agree that the sky is overprocessed.

Thierry