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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: sdwilsonsct on May 26, 2015, 01:51:36 pm

Title: Concrete
Post by: sdwilsonsct on May 26, 2015, 01:51:36 pm

No timber in Iceland, many houses are made of concrete.
I wish I had also taken pictures of the lovely modern concrete houses. Next time.
Feedback welcome.

Title: Re: Concrete
Post by: Paulo Bizarro on May 27, 2015, 03:45:44 am

Good series, with various examples. I would like to see the last one in colour, just for the sake of keeping the set more homogeneous.

Title: Re: Concrete
Post by: brandtb on May 27, 2015, 10:59:33 am

Scott - I think all three are good/have potential, I like the first one best because of the dynamism, and then the second...although not sure about crop...and I would work on processing a bit...color, light dark values. The last one  I think could possibly be worked into something better via processing...don't know though. I like the shape of house - maybe look at it centered in a square crop. Also, was color good in third?  /Brandt

Title: Re: Concrete
Post by: sdwilsonsct on May 27, 2015, 10:50:24 pm

Thanks, Paulo and Brandt. Here's 3 colour and square. I like the framing in the square, but miss the diagonal formed by the road.

Title: Re: Concrete
Post by: Cartagenaphoto on May 28, 2015, 04:45:56 am

Quote from: sdwilsonsct on May 27, 2015, 10:50:24 pm

Thanks, Paulo and Brandt. Here's 3 colour and square. I like the framing in the square, but miss the diagonal formed by the road.

I think the first version works better. But maybe in color.
The first shot of the white house would maybe be great in B&W.

David Cartagena