Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Todd Suttles on January 03, 2015, 10:25:22 pm
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Critique on what I did with this one would be appreciated. good/bad..
thanks, t
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I'm thinking you should give that swing a little more importance.
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I'm thinking you should give that swing a little more importance.
I agree - or remove it altogether, as this seems to be a photograph of some rather lovely trees. I'd also be a lot less heavy-handed with the toning.
Jeremy
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I don't know if the swing was a little off kilter. However if it was or wasn't I would straighten it up because it looks as if it is falling out of the frame. I certainly wouldn't take it out because it nicely adds something to the image that gives balance. Nice processing. As to the toning then I assume that was your vision and I wouldn't criticise it.
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I'm thinking you should give that swing a little more importance.
I agree - or remove it altogether, as this seems to be a photograph of some rather lovely trees. I'd also be a lot less heavy-handed with the toning.
Jeremy
I don't know if the swing was a little off kilter. However if it was or wasn't I would straighten it up because it looks as if it is falling out of the frame. I certainly wouldn't take it out because it nicely adds something to the image that gives balance. Nice processing. As to the toning then I assume that was your vision and I wouldn't criticise it.
THANKS GUYS, All appreciated and agreed; I was 49/50 on toning at all, i liked it pure bw before, like this -? ....much better (I think).
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THANKS GUYS, All appreciated and agreed; I was 49/50 on toning at all, i liked it pure bw before, like this -?
Well, I think that's much better. I prefer toning to be a lot more subtle; but as stamper says, it's really your vision that counts.
Jeremy
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I would keep the toning (ok, maybe slightly less intense), keep the initial image slant, and remove the swing completely.
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I would keep the toning (ok, maybe slightly less intense), keep the initial image slant, and remove the swing completely.
Vr 03; swing gone, 50%tone; back to full frame, no crop. I liked the swing until I saw it without. The pot is enough to balance and keep me from following the water out of the frame. I think.
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Third try is the winner, IMHO. The trees are gorgeous, and the swing was irrelevant.
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Much more interesting with the swing.
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I maintain my first thought, the shot would be better with the swing a little more central; the last version is a nice picture and that's about it.
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Much more interesting with the swing.
Agreed.
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Todd...there are lot of generic and non-interesting "things" in the frame and not any good elements really...what you have is basically an excercise in "toning" and toning itself does not always a good image make /B
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Thanks everyone who took the time to contribute and help. I learned a lot about how to look at an image. much appreciated..... t