Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Bruce Cox on November 29, 2014, 12:32:43 pm
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This is from the local park yesterday. Comments?
The detail is at 100%.
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Depends on what you're after. I'd have put a Tri-Grip reflector to her side camera left and used a Tri-Grip diffuser camera right. But that would soften the whole thing and make the girl more attractive. I'd guess that wasn't the effect you were after.
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Lighting has always been next semester for me, though I'll get there someday. I was out to learn the Olympus E-M5 and the 75 mm [equ. 150 mm], f 1.8. I have never used a lens quite this long, and the one that came close was not this fast. The camera is somewhat small for my hand and the menu is heavy for my mind. I might have subtitled this student work, though "it could have been worse" if I posted what I had a couple of days earlier.
When they were more seriously at work, Dad [whoever they are] ran the camera and Mom held the reflector.
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Here is one of "Mom".
One of "Mom" modified 10:06 PM. and again the next day.
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Are these images even worth a display?
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Are these images even worth a display?
No, it hasn't been worth it so far.
If I had it to do over again, I would have made it clear that they weren't posing for me.
If being confusing is the same thing as ambiguity, then maybe it's "street".
Bruce
And next time I may not include a detail that gets more views than the photo as a whole.