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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: seamus finn on October 29, 2014, 08:36:01 pm

Title: To Be Young Again
Post by: seamus finn on October 29, 2014, 08:36:01 pm

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Title: Re: To Be Young Again
Post by: seamus finn on October 29, 2014, 09:31:11 pm

Or how do I get out of this place.

Title: Re: To Be Young Again
Post by: seamus finn on October 30, 2014, 01:59:35 pm

Any takers?

Title: Re: To Be Young Again
Post by: Bruce Cox on October 30, 2014, 05:00:35 pm

My eyes respond to the composition by sliding off to the left.  If you have more of the frame you might try adding some back in, or make a square out of the right side?