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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: chuckn on October 28, 2014, 04:26:30 pm

Title: Window Pane Abstraction
Post by: chuckn on October 28, 2014, 04:26:30 pm

Comments???

Chuck.

Title: Re: Window Pane Abstraction
Post by: SanderKikkert on October 29, 2014, 10:18:57 am

The soft background through the glass looks fabulous, however the fact that not the entire plane of the windowframe is in focus and that the righthandside of the image is bit cluttered in this crop distracts me from that beautiful background, given the angle of shooting you'd probably need a tiltable lens to achieve the entire frame in focus and the background still soft.

Hope this helps,

Kind Regards, Sander

Title: Re: Window Pane Abstraction
Post by: chuckn on October 29, 2014, 05:04:30 pm

Thanks Sander. I was trying out my new 50mm lens. Took this photo to see what the bokeh effect would look like.

Chuck.