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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Jeremy Roussak on October 04, 2014, 07:46:51 am

Title: steamy afternoon
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on October 04, 2014, 07:46:51 am

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Jeremy

Title: Re: steamy afternoon
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on October 09, 2014, 03:40:12 pm

No?

Jeremy

Title: Re: steamy afternoon
Post by: RSL on October 09, 2014, 03:45:18 pm

It's pretty, Jeremy.

Title: Re: steamy afternoon
Post by: stamper on October 10, 2014, 03:46:09 am

IMO a little more contrast, especially in the foreground would make this a fine image. There is a nice balance to the composition.

Title: Re: steamy afternoon
Post by: sdwilsonsct on October 11, 2014, 11:29:09 am

In one sense there is balance but in another the cloud is so bright and unusual that it kind of pulls the whole thing off centre. IMO.

Title: Re: steamy afternoon
Post by: Jeremy Roussak on October 12, 2014, 01:51:22 pm

Thanks for the comments, all.

Quote from: sdwilsonsct on October 11, 2014, 11:29:09 am

In one sense there is balance but in another the cloud is so bright and unusual that it kind of pulls the whole thing off centre. IMO.

It's steam: it's an interesting part of the world.

stamper's suggestion of adding a bit of contrast works well.

Thanks

Jeremy