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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: mal mcilwraith on September 23, 2014, 04:12:32 am

Title: The spirit figures
Post by: mal mcilwraith on September 23, 2014, 04:12:32 am
How the spirit of the rocks ebb and flow in geological time - we come, we go, they stay.

Bald Rock National Park

IQ 180,35mm, iso 100 f8 1/160

5 images focused stacked, graduated red filter, one over lay.
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: francois on September 23, 2014, 08:16:25 am
Mysterious, I'm not sure that I can understand all the elements but I like it a lot. Well imagined and perfectly crafted.
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: sdwilsonsct on September 23, 2014, 09:04:36 am
Good one. I think I'd also like a version without the overlay.
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: mal mcilwraith on September 23, 2014, 03:11:33 pm
Scott

A fair request. Here it is. This image was taken to be a black and white image, no colour version available.

Mal
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: luxborealis on September 23, 2014, 06:11:06 pm
Both are beautiful, Mal, but the addition of the overlay adds another dimension of mystery. To me, it elevates the original to a higher plain of intrigue, making it more thought-provoking.

Great work, Mal!!
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: RSL on September 23, 2014, 06:38:15 pm
+1
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: MattNQ on September 23, 2014, 07:18:07 pm
Mal,
The original stands strong on its own, but as others have said, the overlay makes for a very different image - strange & mysterious, and almost unsettling  ;D

Matt
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: sdwilsonsct on September 24, 2014, 09:19:52 am
Thanks, Mal. Good seeing, processing and interpretation.
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: MoreOrLess on September 26, 2014, 11:02:42 am
Both are beautiful, Mal, but the addition of the overlay adds another dimension of mystery. To me, it elevates the original to a higher plain of intrigue, making it more thought-provoking.

Great work, Mal!!

I think it helps balance the image more as well adding interest to the lower left and upper right of the frame.
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: pcgpcg on September 26, 2014, 11:30:40 am
I love your creativity.  I have never been to Australia, but I can see an influence from exposure to Aboriginal culture.
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: mal mcilwraith on September 26, 2014, 03:34:14 pm
Paul


There are parts of the Australian landscape which are like old weathered bones, so there is less lush greenery and more earth colours.

In about a week we are off on another landscape adventure to a place called the Flinders Ranges in South Australia. So I am excited about experiencing the barren ridge lines, the plunging gorges and the ancient river gums whose branches curl like campfire smoke, before they hang their gnarled fingers towards the ground.



Regards



Mal
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: Bruce Cox on September 26, 2014, 04:34:27 pm
I think I like the overlay of shapes better than I do the overlay of lines, though I have not seen it without the lines.
Title: Re: The spirit figures
Post by: mal mcilwraith on September 26, 2014, 07:27:42 pm
Here is another image from the same day which explores the contrast between complexity and simplicity - I have just noticed, that in both cases the complexity element is dead and the simplicity image is rock and living trees.

Maybe instead of a new camera I need a shrink!!!!


Mal