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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: chuckn on September 22, 2014, 08:42:48 pm

Title: Temple Reading
Post by: chuckn on September 22, 2014, 08:42:48 pm

Woman reading at the Menjin Longshan Buddhist Temple in Taipei, Taiwan. Magical place to be.

Chuck.

Title: Re: Temple Reading
Post by: mal mcilwraith on September 23, 2014, 04:33:32 am

I rarely do square format but your image surely works.

Lots to look at and the girl reading to keep returning to. This image has me thinking, mmmmm, thinking.


Thanks.



Mal

Title: Re: Temple Reading
Post by: chuckn on September 25, 2014, 09:57:54 am

Thanks Mal. Over the past few months I have been leaning toward square crops more and more. They just feel good to me.

Chuck.

Title: Re: Temple Reading
Post by: DF1 on September 25, 2014, 02:13:50 pm

Given the title, "Temple Reading", the focus really should have been on the woman. As it is, the photograph should be titled "Boring Stone Column". The woman reading is interesting, the column much less so. You missed an opportunity to make a better photograph.