Luminous Landscape Forum
The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: seamus finn on September 18, 2014, 08:08:16 pm
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I think that dot is copyright of Russ.
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Love it!
Cheers,
Bernard
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Love it!
Cheers,
Bernard
+1.
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+1. And I hereby give you permission to use my copyrighted dot.
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What do I like about your image?
I like the soft form of the man.
I like the detail in the inscriptions and floor and wall tiles.
I like the way the light coming in from the hall is forming a sort of ominous ideological face - is this the fixed face of institutionalised religion?
I don't like that little rope that makes the place look like a museum rather than a living building.
I would straighten up the verticals.
Mal
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What do I like about your image?
I like the soft form of the man.
I like the detail in the inscriptions and floor and wall tiles.
I like the way the light coming in from the hall is forming a sort of ominous ideological face - is this the fixed face of institutionalised religion?
I don't like that little rope that makes the place look like a museum rather than a living building.
I would straighten up the verticals.
Mal
This is for you, Mal.
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Seamus
I guess what matters is do you think it tweaks your image - or do you prefer your original?
To me the idea of this section is to get constructive comment rather than just a pat on the back - which is nice but I find does not help me improve.
Thanks for taking the time to experiment with your image.
Regards
Mal
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Mal,
I think the second version is a better image. Many thanks for your interest.
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Yes sometimes small changes can just allow the image to sit together better without a distraction that just niggles.
Mal