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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: armand on September 02, 2014, 09:02:06 pm

Title: SF
Post by: armand on September 02, 2014, 09:02:06 pm

San Francisco pano

Title: Re: SF
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on September 02, 2014, 09:45:24 pm

Interesting angle. I find the blocked shadows in the foreground incongruent with otherwise muted colors. I also find the color of the sea a bit too cyan, but that could be just my personal preference.

Title: Re: SF
Post by: armand on September 02, 2014, 09:59:44 pm

Quote from: Slobodan Blagojevic on September 02, 2014, 09:45:24 pm

Interesting angle. I find the blocked shadows in the foreground incongruent with otherwise muted colors. I also find the color of the sea a bit too cyan, but that could be just my personal preference.

I could fix both at some extent, the sea in particular. Lifting the shadows is also possible but I have to be quite careful with the noise, the entire shot has some noise at baseline (ISO 800, lifted shadows)

Title: Re: SF
Post by: armand on September 03, 2014, 09:21:32 pm

new version

Title: Re: SF
Post by: David Eckels on September 03, 2014, 10:42:48 pm

Honestly, I preferred the OP. It's dusk!