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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: Richard Pearlman on June 23, 2014, 05:34:58 pm

Title: Coastal Landscape
Post by: Richard Pearlman on June 23, 2014, 05:34:58 pm
I took this yesterday. Unfortunately, it was overcast, so the sky was rather boring. I wanted to capture the barrenness of the landscape. Any comments or critiques are appreciated. 
Title: Re: Coastal Landscape
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on June 23, 2014, 06:55:17 pm
I think that if you experiment with a lighter and/or more/less contrasty versions, you might achieve that bareness goal easier.
Title: Re: Coastal Landscape
Post by: Paulo Bizarro on June 24, 2014, 03:52:29 am
It seems an area with great potential. To me, the image does not work, because the path leads my eye to the middle of the image on the top, where nothing is happening.
Title: Re: Coastal Landscape
Post by: Herbc on June 24, 2014, 08:55:02 am
You might try a very low camera position.  This would make the road more important, and would lead the eye toward the sparse trees at the top of the image.  Otherwise, shoot from a position way left of where you took this one, as the composition is not compelling as shot.
Title: Re: Coastal Landscape
Post by: PeterAit on June 24, 2014, 10:21:19 am
The sky is perfect - barren landscape, barren sky.
Title: Re: Coastal Landscape
Post by: matoqui on June 24, 2014, 10:43:24 am
I like it if cropped aggressively....
Title: Re: Coastal Landscape
Post by: Alan Klein on June 24, 2014, 10:45:26 am
Keep the sky out of the picture when it is boring.  Zoom in to a smaller area on the ground.  Find something there that is interesting.
Title: Re: Coastal Landscape
Post by: Richard Pearlman on June 24, 2014, 04:39:16 pm
Everyone, thank you for the great responses. I will experiment with this image a little more and try a few different compositions when I return to this area.