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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: churly on June 18, 2014, 05:24:53 pm

Title: Water Series
Post by: churly on June 18, 2014, 05:24:53 pm
One of my favorite subjects.  Lots of textures but I'm never sure how accessible these shots are.
Critique welcome.
Chuck

Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: PeterAit on June 18, 2014, 05:27:02 pm
Water is indeed a fascinating subject. My last solo show of some 40 prints had the theme of water. You have done a great job of capturing the movement without obscuring the structure.
Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: SZRitter on June 18, 2014, 05:31:45 pm
Not hugely keen on the second two, not sure why though.

However, I do like the first one. It has a sense of depth with the overlay of the softly moving water and the stones. It is calm, but with a fluid motion. It encourages one to reflect upon what they are seeing.

The other two just feel uneasy to me. Not slow enough to create a soft abstract, and not fast enough to capture the raw power of the water.

*All thoughts are solely my own, based on my interpretation upon viewing the images quickly. Feel free disregard.*
Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: louoates on June 18, 2014, 06:04:52 pm
Nicely seen and captured. I'm not sure what you mean by "accessible".
Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: luxborealis on June 18, 2014, 07:10:37 pm
Love #3. Very dynamic and abstract.
Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: Eric Myrvaagnes on June 18, 2014, 09:22:35 pm
#1 and #3 are my favorites. Nice set.
Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: Walt Roycraft on June 18, 2014, 09:40:09 pm
All good, but #3 is wonderful. As is, and many crop variations.
Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: sdwilsonsct on June 18, 2014, 10:04:59 pm
However, I do like the first one. It has a sense of depth with the overlay of the softly moving water and the stones. It is calm, but with a fluid motion. It encourages one to reflect upon what they are seeing.

Yes, and it has a pleasing composition.
Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: francois on June 19, 2014, 06:28:26 am
Photo #3 is also my favorite with #1 as second.
Title: Re: Water Series
Post by: churly on June 19, 2014, 08:23:35 am
Thanks to everyone for your comments and variety of opinion.

What I am trying to do with these is freeze certain aspects of the motion and blur others.  So the technique is similar to that described by Michael with his bull fighting set - panning with one of the dominant motions.  I've been trying this for some time with very mixed success but when you can read the water it works pretty well.  Composition is an ongoing problem.  The results are sometimes counter intuitive, that the reason for my comment on accessibility.  That and my wife's typical comment of "oh well that kind of interesting" with emphasis on the "kind of".

Chuck