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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: Chris Calohan on June 11, 2014, 03:18:46 pm

Title: Sunflower, Part Four
Post by: Chris Calohan on June 11, 2014, 03:18:46 pm

Just read where the last Navajo Windtalker (Code Talkers, officially) passed last week. This image is in homage to him and in keeping with my sunflower series.

Title: Re: Sunflower, Part Four
Post by: armand on June 12, 2014, 03:32:06 pm

The fence is a distraction, I would try to darken it more so we can entirely focus on the flowers.

Title: Re: Sunflower, Part Four
Post by: brandtb on June 13, 2014, 06:25:12 am

I would look at the image as the upper right quadrant...and work on framing there.  The rest of the existing frame especially all of the green leaves, stalks, fence etc. just cluttering up the frame and distracting from the power of the still flower and the flower that's "in motion" /B