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The Art of Photography => User Critiques => Topic started by: seamus finn on June 02, 2014, 02:29:48 pm

Title: Excluded
Post by: seamus finn on June 02, 2014, 02:29:48 pm
This chap seems to be in a zone that ordinary folk don't inhabit - hence the tape cutting him off from the rest of  humanity, and him from them.




Title: Re: Excluded
Post by: Slobodan Blagojevic on June 02, 2014, 02:46:58 pm
A good shot, Seamus. In a photojournalistic sense. My "fine art" inclination, however, would like to see the main points emphasized. To that end, I would significantly darken the image outside the red lines and inside the red oval, leaving just the main characters and the tape highlighted. I understand that a fine art version might not be your cup of tea, however.
Title: Re: Excluded
Post by: seamus finn on June 03, 2014, 08:33:16 am
Read and noted, Slobodan -thanks for going to the trouble.