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Equipment & Techniques => Landscape & Nature Photography => Topic started by: Richard Pearlman on April 15, 2014, 01:39:30 pm

Title: Moody Beach Scene
Post by: Richard Pearlman on April 15, 2014, 01:39:30 pm

I'm not exactly sure what to think about this one. I originally felt like the foreground was too cluttered, but now, I don't see it as being as much a problem as I originally thought. Any comments on composition or processing are much appreciated.

Title: Re: Moody Beach Scene
Post by: brandtb on April 15, 2014, 03:36:00 pm

Richard - The light looks light was nice that day. Re. foreground in your image - what is in the foreground is not interesting or compelling... but takes up nearly half the frame.  I think your original instinct about it being "cluttered" was spot on. /B

Title: Re: Moody Beach Scene
Post by: Richard Pearlman on April 16, 2014, 09:23:55 am

Thanks, Brandt.

Title: Re: Moody Beach Scene
Post by: David Eckels on April 16, 2014, 09:28:28 am

Have to agree with Brandt. Maybe just a few steps forward to the top of that f/g dune and angle downwards. The light on the sand is cool and it seems you've got a good sky. Good luck. A scene worth exploring in my view.